I woke up this morning, and my first thought was "Yay, other chapter of Special will be up today!". No joke. You have now defined my Thursdays for me.
I can tell you had a lot of fun writing Santana. It was fun to read!
I loved the gradual tease of Kurt's powers. Given that you said we were getting more of Kurt in chapter 4, I wasn't even expecting as much as we got here. I thought his reactions and thought processes were really interesting, and I thought the fact that you had him scathingly comment on a "cartoon copy" of himself was a nice breath of realism in a mostly comedically toned piece, because you know there are many fanfic versions of Kurt that would have been over the moon with the power to summon designer clothing out of thin air.
I LOVED everything that came out of Artie's mouth.
Also, here are some other lines that I particularly loved and/or almost died over while reading:
"I lied, Finn!" Kurt wailed. "We're going to get locked up!""You lied," Finn repeated. His smile fell away. "But... you said it was all going to be okay.""That was before I knew I had them!"
Maybe, if Santana focused very hard, she would be able to set herself on fire again. At this point it seemed like the better option.
After a moment, Finn glared at seemingly the entire room. "Okay, are we done with the joke about me and brain powers, now?"
Finn said with annoyance when bedlam erupted anew, but Rachel pressed a cold drink into his hand and he visibly lost his train of thought. >>>>Oh, my. Rachel, you naughty girl?
Also, Brittany is going to accidentally turn the entire earth into a marshmallow. We're all going to die.
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I can tell you had a lot of fun writing Santana. It was fun to read!
I loved the gradual tease of Kurt's powers. Given that you said we were getting more of Kurt in chapter 4, I wasn't even expecting as much as we got here. I thought his reactions and thought processes were really interesting, and I thought the fact that you had him scathingly comment on a "cartoon copy" of himself was a nice breath of realism in a mostly comedically toned piece, because you know there are many fanfic versions of Kurt that would have been over the moon with the power to summon designer clothing out of thin air.
I LOVED everything that came out of Artie's mouth.
Also, here are some other lines that I particularly loved and/or almost died over while reading:
"I lied, Finn!" Kurt wailed. "We're going to get locked up!""You lied," Finn repeated. His smile fell away. "But... you said it was all going to be okay.""That was before I knew I had them!"
Maybe, if Santana focused very hard, she would be able to set herself on fire again. At this point it seemed like the better option.
After a moment, Finn glared at seemingly the entire room. "Okay, are we done with the joke about me and brain powers, now?"
Finn said with annoyance when bedlam erupted anew, but Rachel pressed a cold drink into his hand and he visibly lost his train of thought.
>>>>Oh, my. Rachel, you naughty girl?
Also, Brittany is going to accidentally turn the entire earth into a marshmallow. We're all going to die.