Puck, annoyed, cut off everyone's suggestions to turn toward Finn. "That's Superman, dude. Be serious."
Oh my god, the one-liners in this chapter were SLAYING me. Not gonna c/p them all, but that one and "Captain Israel" were particularly hilarious.
So Kurt can make illusions! That is super awesome. But as another commenter said, I definitely get the feeling that's not the only thing he can do... In the prologue he was pulling all kinds of tricks. Brittany is probably my other favorite, though. Her powers are just... genius. Beyond genius.
You write every character SO well. Can't wait for more, keep it up!
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Puck, annoyed, cut off everyone's suggestions to turn toward Finn. "That's Superman, dude. Be serious."
Oh my god, the one-liners in this chapter were SLAYING me. Not gonna c/p them all, but that one and "Captain Israel" were particularly hilarious.
So Kurt can make illusions! That is super awesome. But as another commenter said, I definitely get the feeling that's not the only thing he can do... In the prologue he was pulling all kinds of tricks. Brittany is probably my other favorite, though. Her powers are just... genius. Beyond genius.
You write every character SO well. Can't wait for more, keep it up!