http://geoffrey-f.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] geoffrey-f.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] miggy 2011-10-02 12:26 am (UTC)

You know, even reading this now I can't shake the feeling that Quinn has some diabolical plan and is only pretending to go along with Mercedes. At least the ice is appropriate for the Ice Queen!

Mercedes, who often leaves me fairly cold, is in great form here - I really like how you've written her. The interaction with Kurt and Tina was nicely done (and poor Finn). I liked the idea that Kurt is going along with it to look after Finn, who clearly needs it more than Rachel does (although this smacks of a convenient excuse to me). This is a wonderful story and I'm always looking forward to more!

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