I've been reading along the whole time and lousy about commenting (for which I really, really do apologize), but I had to comment about the reveal at the end. I mean, I knew it had to be coming- it makes so much sense for Sue and this universe, not to mention that you can tell you love writing Sue- but the way you pulled the curtain back made me crack up. Perfect reveal.

I also love how you write Finn, especially in this. You balance him very well, making him not the brightest but not so stupid he can barely figure out breathing, and he makes his mistakes still, but in proportion. For all that Finn screws up a lot, I still really love the boy as a character (and find his screwups interesting), so I'm delighted to see any fic that keeps Finn in character without either bashing him or erasing the things he does wrong.

Anyway, just wanted to say that even though I've been crap about commenting, I've really been enjoying reading this. It's hard to find good ensemble fic, so that only makes this even better.